2018年考研英語二寫作范文“2017某市消費者選擇餐廳關注的因素”
Directions:
Write an essay based on the chart below. In your writing, you should
1) interpret the chart, and
2) give your comments.
You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.(15 points)
——摘自2018年考研英語二真題
【參考范文】
The pie chart above evidently illustrates various target elements in terms of consumers’ choosing restaurants in a certain city in 2017. To be specific. distinguishing feature took a lion’s share, accounting for approximately 36.3%. While service and surroundings made up around 26.8% and 24.2% respectively. However, the least proportions were price and other factors, occupying roughly 8% and 4.7%.
What triggers this phenomenon? Maybe at least two reasons can be identified to contribute to this matter. But the most important is that along with the development of economy, people’s living standards have been improved remarkably, as a consequence of which, an increasing amount of individuals focus on superior service and favorable surroundings when they choose restaurants rather than price. Simultaneously, there is another essential factor that after resolving the issue of food and clothing, quite a few consumers’ food conception has transformed dramatically, to the extent that they increasingly pursue spiritual consumption, which should be also taken into account.
Based on what has been discussed above: a conclusion can be drawn safely that more up-scale food services will be prevailing in modern food market. And it is predictable that those restaurants with favorable service: distinctive features and excellent circumstances will be beloved by more customers in some years ahead. However, it is advisable for the public to consume rationally, avoiding extravagance and waste.
一. 審題
該圖表反應某市消費者選擇餐廳時的關注因素，很明顯，現在的大部分消費者在選擇就餐餐廳時，已經不再過度關注價格，而變得更加注重享受，關注因素更多地放在了特色，環境，服務方面。可見，由於國家經濟的發展，人們的生活水平日益提高，人們在外出就餐時，更加注重個人享受方面的因素。這種消費類話題，是海文沖刺課堂中重點給同學們提到的社會熱點之消費類話題，所有的消費類，例如，沖刺講義上的網上購物人數分布，購買智能家居電器等等，都屬於消費類話題，二三段的原因分析和總結都可以直接套用。
二.謀篇布局
第一段：描述圖表。針對這種餅狀圖，我們在海文的課堂上，屢次給大家提到了餅狀圖的分析思路和可直接套用的模板。只要大家按照餅狀圖的模板，再結合主題詞的翻譯，可以在很短的時間內搞定第一段。另外，第一段一個很重要的部分就是標題文字翻譯，不過，在海文沖刺課堂上，老師專門帶領大家重點專題練習過標題文字的翻譯方法，所以，在翻譯時，從后往前翻，其他的處理為后置定語，時間狀語，地點狀語等即可。標題翻譯為：focusing factors of customers in a city when choosing a restaurant in 2017。接下來就可以直接套用首段餅狀圖模板：Emerging from the clearly depicted pie chart is the distribution of focusing factors of citizens in a city when choosing a restaurant in 2017, consisting of 4 parts, which are features, service, environment, price and other factors. Among them, the proportion of service, environment, price and other factors is 26.8%, 23.8%, 8.4% and 4.7% respectively. By contrast, the factor of focusing on features of the restaurant is in the lead, accounting for 36.3%.
第二段：分析原因。圖表所呈現的現象是消費者在外出就餐時，更注重個人享受，而不是單純的價格優惠。可見，引起這種現象的原因很明顯，可以從兩個角度去展開分析：1.國家經濟和個人財富的發展;2.人們生活水平的日益提高。這兩條消費類話題的原因分析，之前在沖刺課堂上，我們練習的網上購物，購買智能家居電器的文章，都可以直接套用，替換主題詞即可。What has triggered this phenomenon? To begin with, with the fast development of national economy and personal wealth, people in China have stepped into an era of enjoying life, transforming traditional pattern of living. Therefore, such a great proportion of citizens are more likely to focus on the features of a restaurant, instead of only concentrating on the price. Moreover, in a society where living standard is highly advocated, citizens in mounting numbers in China, shrugging off their former habit of focusing on lower price, gradually find the service and environment of a restaurant are essential factors. According to a survey conducted by China Research Center, up to 87% Chinese people prefer to choose a comfortable and fashionable restaurant when they go out for eating.
第三段：提出自身見解，加以合理展望。第三段簡單介紹下這種趨勢的發展情況，預測這種趨勢還會這樣持續下去。海文沖刺課堂上給大家整理出來的結尾段，可以直接套用，不用做任何的調整。Taking into account what has been argued so far, I am inclined to think about the current situation is normal. In view of the analysis above, it can be predicted that the trend will continue in the future. Accordingly, it is of no necessity for the public to regard it with too much consideration.