英語寫作技巧


天龍八部簡潔版

 

1. 描述類經典句

用法:

...很重要,...很必要

句型:

_______ plays an extremely important role.

____ is of utmost importance.

Nothing is more important than _______.

 

It is generally accepted that environmental protection plays an extremely important role in our lives.

 

2.  重視類經典句

用法:

重視...

句型:

pay attention to …

attach importance to …

 

As the post-90's generation, we should attach great importance to maintaining good health.

 

3. 議論類經典句

用法:

...產生了爭議

句型:

opinions vary greatly when it comes to ...

當談及到我們是否該控制物質的欲望,大家觀點不一。

Opinions vary greatly when it comes to whether we should control our desire for materialism

 

Opinions vary greatly when it comes to whether one should work for a state-owned company or a joint venture.

 

4. 結果類經典句

用法:

...對於...產生了影響

 

句型:

exert a positive/negative/great impact on …

It cannot be denied that economic growth exerts a great impact on our environment.

 

It goes without saying that economic growth exerts a huge impact on our environment.

 

5. 見證類經典句

用法:

在某時某地發生了...(該句型實際解釋為:...見證了...)

 

句型:

… witness … (用時間和地點做主語)

 

過去幾年里,越來越多的父母把孩子送到藝術學校去。

(改寫成:過去幾年見證了越來越多的父母把孩子送到藝術學校去。)

 

The past several years have witnessed a sharp increase in the number of students who would like to go abroad for further study.

 

6. 使動類經典句

用法:

...使得...

 

句型:

enable/allow/render sb. to do …

 

Virtual Reality, which allows us to communicate more effectively, has captured a great deal of public attention.

 

7. 引出類經典句

用法:

...成為了...重要的社會問題

 

句型:

(1) … has arisen as one of … (很適合開頭句)

孩子的教育已經成為最重要的社會問題之一。

Children's education has recently arisen as one of the essential problems.

 

Children's education has recently arisen as one of the essential problems.

 

8. 趨勢類經典句

用法:

越來越…

句型:

More and more people …

An increasing/ A growing number of people …

People in mounting numbers …

 

People in mounting numbers tend to pay much attention to how to process information effectively.

六脈神劍(起承轉合獨評)

我把六脈神劍總結為四個問題,更便於閱讀。

1. "兩點"怎么表述?

To begin with, …    Furthermore, …

2."順接"和"轉接"怎么表述

順接:

as a result

進一步 what's more

此外 in addition

 

轉接

however

3."總結"怎么表述

總結

all in all, in a word

如前所述

Given the factors I have just outlined, I personally maintain that….

4."個人觀點"怎么表述

In my opinion, from my perspective.

第二段湊字數:萬能句子(替換主語)

經濟類:

1. In recent years, China is marked by rapid economic growth and continuous technological innovation.

近年來,中國以快速的經濟增長和持續的技術革新為特征。

 

人口類:

2. However, as the job market is getting gloomy and competition is becoming fierce, it is increasingly difficult for college undergraduates to find a decent job. 

然而,隨着勞動力市場變得低迷,競爭日趨激烈,對於大學生來說找到一份好工作越來越困難。

 

社會類:

3. With the quickening pace of urban life and ever-increasing pressure, people in growing numbers are suffering from either the physical or mental problems. 

隨着不斷加快的都市節奏以及日益增長的壓力,越來越多的人正遭受到身體或心理的問題。

 

技術類:

4. Technological innovation really brings us much convenience, exerting a huge impact on our traditional cultures.

技術革新給我們帶來了很多便利,同時也對於傳統文化產生了巨大的影響

 

 

教育類:

5. Reading is of utmost importance for one's life. Reading can increase our contentment when we are cheerful and happy, and can lessen our pain when we are sad and lonely. Reading can also help people relax and unwind. All of us can savor a wide range of experiences through reading. All in all, reading increases our knowledge and skills, broadens our horizon and widens our circle of friends.

閱讀在我們生活中扮演着至關重要的角色。閱讀可以在我們高興快樂時增加我們的滿足感,也可以在我們難過孤獨時減少我們的痛苦。閱讀也可以幫助人們放松心情。我們可以通過閱讀品嘗廣泛的經歷。總而言之,閱讀增加了我們的知識和技術,擴展了我們的視野,擴大了我們的交際圈。

 

環境類:

6. We are suffering greatly from the environmental destruction. Environmental protection is caring about ourselves and ensuring environmental sustainability for future generation.

我們正在遭受到巨大的環境破壞。環境保護是關懷我們自己,並且為我們的后代確保環境的可持續性發展。

 

家庭類:

7. There exist some misunderstandings and generation gaps between parents and their children. However, everyone has the duty to take care of their parents, especially when they are old and sick. Also, an increasing aging population will have enormous consequences for any society.

在父母和子女中存在着一些誤解和代溝。然后每個人都有責任去照顧自己的父母,尤其當他們年老多病。而且,越來越多的老齡化人口對於任何社會都具有巨大的影響。

 

精神類:

 

8. Life is ten percent what you make it and ninety percent how you take it. The value of life lies not in the length of days, but in the use we make of them. So having right values in life is very important for us, especially youngsters.

生命之百分之十在於你如何塑造它,百分之九十在於你如何對待它。生命的價值並非在於天的長度,而是在於我們怎么利用他。因此具有正確的價值觀非常重要,尤其是年輕人。

 

 

 

 

 

 

模板

模板1:描圖類(1

如果題干提示寫解釋現象,即用這個模板。

第一段:描圖

The picture captures a very special scene: ____________(描圖圖片). Simple as it is, what the picture conveys to us is thought-provoking. _____(圖片含義). 

第二段:現象解釋

Strikingly, in contemporary society, this sort of phenomenon is becoming increasingly common and eye-catching. Two fundamental factors could account for this social phenomenon. First and foremost, this problem stems from ________(原因1名詞). _______(具體闡述). Moreover, this situation can be seen as a consequence of ________(原因2名詞). _______(具體闡述).

第三段:提倡解決(如果覺得長,兩種解決方法選一種即可)

The following ways can be adopted to advocate(好現象)/curb(壞現象) this social phenomenon. On the micro level, I believe it is every individual's duty and it is high time that we should take action. Since my own voice is too weak to be heard, I hope the authority and mass media should be held accountable. Only by this means can we lead to a better life.

 

模板2:描圖類(2

如果題干提示寫正反觀點,即用這個模板。

第一段:描圖

The picture captures a very special scene: ____________(描圖圖片). Simple as it is, what the picture conveys to us is thought-provoking. _____(圖片含義).

第二段:正反觀點

Opinions vary when it comes to _________(主題). Some argue that ________(正方觀點). However, those who strongly oppose are not among the minority. They hold that _____(反方觀點).

第三段:個人觀點

Given the factors I have just outlined, it can be concluded that the question quite depends on personal choice. However, I am fully convinced that _______(自我觀點).

 

模板3:引言類

第一段:引言

_______(主題詞) has captured numerous attentions from the general public, just as the saying goes "_______"(名言照抄). The saying denotes that _______(名言含義). 

第二段:現象解釋

Two fundamental factors could account for this principle. To begin with, _______(原因1+具體闡述). Moreover, _______(原因2+具體闡述). 

第三段:個人觀點

Given the factors I have just outlined, it is advisable to _______ (總結). To the best of my knowledge, _______(發表自己觀點).

 

模板4:圖表類

第一段:圖表

The given table offers a glimpse of _____(圖表主題). _________(圖表內容). Simple as it is, this chart symbolically characterizes a status quo. 

第二段:現象解釋

First and foremost, this problem stems from ________(原因1名詞). _______(具體闡述). Moreover, this situation can be seen as a consequence of ________(原因2名詞). _______(具體闡述).

第三段:趨勢說明

Given the factors I have just outlined, it can be concluded that _______(總結). 

(如果好的趨勢) As regards to this social tendency, I believe it is inspiring and positive. As this trend is still in its infancy, we believe it will no doubt go further and lead to future prospect.

(如果壞的趨勢) From my perspective, I realize this trend needs to be slowed down since it has already poses negative impact on our society.

 

1. Directions: Suppose you are asked to give advice on whether to major in science or humanities at college, write an essay to state your opinion. You are required to write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. (20176月六級第一套)

 

思路:

天龍八部 2+3 

萬能背景 7+20+2+14 

積極結尾(有改動)

 

It goes without saying that higher education has captured a great deal of attention from the general public. Opinions vary greatly when it comes to whether one should choose science or humanities at college. If I were you, I would like to take science as my major.

 

There are two fundamental factors contributing to my option. To begin with, nowadays as the job market is getting gloomy and competition is becoming fierce, it is increasingly difficult for college undergraduates to find a decent job. However, learning science can increase our knowledge and skills, broaden our horizon, and make us wise. A great number of positions require candidates who study science. Furthermore, in recent years, China is marked by rapid economic growth and continuous technological innovation. Technological innovation really brings us much convenience, exerting a huge impact on our traditional cultures. Science is useful and inseparable from our life.

 

Given the factors I have just outlined, I maintain that science is of utmost importance to our life and our future. The time is right for us to take full advantage of ample existing opportunities. We should do our utmost to advocate the study of science. (193 words)

 

 

 

2. For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on innovation. Your essay should include the importance of innovation and measures to be taken to encourage innovation. You are required to write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. (201612月六級第一套)

 

思路:

天龍八部 1+5+4 

萬能背景 12+14+15+7+23 

消極結尾(有改動)

 

It goes without saying that innovation plays a key role in developing national economy. The past several years have witnessed a sharp increase in the number of scientists who are making new breakthroughs in their fields. This will definitely exert a huge impact on our society.

 

Considering the importance and necessity of this situation, I feel responsible to discuss it further. To begin with, time and again, science and technology has created wonders and even miracles, thus fortifying our belief in it. Technological innovation really brings us much convenience, exerting a huge impact on our traditional cultures. For example, the popularity of computers and Internet access has laid a solid foundation for the development of e-commerce. It has significantly changed our ways of shopping. Furthermore, as the job market is getting gloomy and competition is becoming fierce, it is increasingly difficult for college undergraduates to find a decent job. We need to create more jobs for youngsters. Innovation is the key point to take the first step.

 

All in all, I personally argue that we should lay great emphasis on innovation. The fundamental way in which the government advocates this spirit is to promote quality-oriented education. The mass media should also join in the efforts in educating the citizens. Only through concerted steps can our society have more peace and harmony. (221 words)

 

3. For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the use of robots. Try to imagine what will happen when more and more robots take the place of human beings in industry as well as people's daily lives. (20166月六級第一套)

 

思路:

天龍八部 6+1+3 

萬能背景 7+9+17 

雙刃劍結尾(有改動)

 

The development of technology has brought us unprecedented transformation, which is inevitable and undeniable. Robots, which are capable of exhibiting artificial intelligence, have emerged into our vision, and tend to play an increasingly important role in our life. Consequently, there is much controversy over what will happen if robots replace human beings in the future. 

 

Considering the significance and necessity of the present situation, I feel responsible to discuss it further. To begin with, if robots play our roles, the job market is getting gloomy and competition will become fierce. It will be increasingly difficult for college undergraduates to find a decent job. Furthermore, there will be an increasing upward mobility of the younger generation and dramatic changes in traditional concepts. Students will try to get the opportunity to increase their knowledge and learn to be independent. As a result, they will not be replaced by robots.

 

Based on my personal experience, I can safely draw a conclusion that the robot is a double-edged sword. Whether it is a boon or a bane will be discussed for a number of years to come. However, one should make sensible use of technology, being a master rather than a slave of it. (203 words)

 

 


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